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I had an epiphany about time magic. "If a tree falls with no one around to listen, does it make a sound?" is also a question that could be asked about time. "If there is a mpment where all forms of matter stop except for one atom, is time still in motion?" Time magic is that answer (depending on the level of power)
But the change would be a simple one as he purposefully goes the "only friends" route to avoid doing the daughter of the elf he's probably seen dozens of scenes with her over two dozen times
I seem to remember that he noticed Her lustful gaze back when they were leaving the village and doubled down on the idea that he shouldn't considering who her mother is.
Agreed, this paragraph is rather out of place. should've led with "After negotiations it was time for dinner." and then list off the two concubines before adding that the Elf and Dwarf head ambassadors had joined in too.
Yeah, why not get all enemies into one basket before opening fire
Did a new author suddenly take over? It went from a sort of serious tone to exaggerated the moment Alex and the father started fighting and now went into Chinese slapstick humor.
Yeah, my first thought was that he use the name of the parent who has the higher position. His father is a count but his mother is a duchess and using that name would make all below a duke/duchess family more cautious if not more likely to be a suck up
"Sorry, My younger sister wants me to set up events with you and telling her no would be like telling my father no."
I might have a problem of forgetting the correct words but I for sure wouldn't call the meak accessory arrogant
because they have the same name. A similarity is a similarity no matter how small.
More body to hide the mana. (or his fat is acting like a brick house vs wifi connection)
It's because of all the "umm...welll....you seeeeeeee...." type of talking the written chose. It reads terribly because not many people do this. would probably sound better if we were listening to it but as it is, it's the equivalent of trying to read on a bumpy road.
Did I miss the ntr tag or did the writer not put one? either way, guess I stop here. (could've easily chose a less gross route if it was the main bully's little sister. probably hit harder too)
If this is a reverse isekai (demon king reincarnated into him) this will be more interesting than I first thought
If you wanted to make it "Strong desires" then make the desire match with the skill. Solo Leveling worked because the MC was chosen by the equivalent of death for his "always close to death" lifestyle. (and getting to rematch the beginning through the anime, some symmetry with the events that lead to the Death Monarch's own ascension)
A good example as to why I think Jesters was a career meant to test the king's worthiness to keep his crown. If the king can't handle being made fun of and tries to execute the jester, it would be a sign he has a short temper and would bring ruin to the kingdom. (of course the jester wouldn't solely mock the king as everyone's patience needs to be tested but the king is the most important mind to gauge)
intelligent*
The wrath of a woman is great but the wrath of a smart woman is worse