Honestly, the story is really well written. The Mc, Ty, has his own unique path that the author managed to explain and plan in a special way. His background story and motives really are good.

More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters!

please keep the chapters coming or we will come with all the villains there are to demand more chapters, because we readers are all together in this war of wanting more chapters.

Who says perfect story does not exist, its right here. Who says perfect story does not exist, its right here. Who says perfect story does not exist, its right here.

I recommend one of my read books which just st=arted but suit somewhat with your description. My Barrier Magic is special

Do you really want such a novel

Author Review -I don't know much whether my writing quality has improved to my first ever story. But I do think that I have at least become better at it. The updates of the story would be slow as I am not doing this as a full-time job so please forgive me about that. About the plot, character, and the world background... Well, it's a surprise.

Hey, you are such a big villain to stop the chapter without completely plot. You are toying with you emotions. Do you think we would not come to read next chapter? We will absolutely come, and you can't stop us. Hey, it was fun writing this review.

Pft! Of course I was going to leave a shameless review. I do want my book to get enough exposure afterall. That being said though, this is my very first book and I would be super grateful if you all could support me and help to make this story better. I also urge you to point out any flaws, plot holes and anything you find odd about the novel. Your feedback really will go a long way. Criticism is nice and all but do not break my fickle heart. I beg of you. Constructive criticism will be very much appreciated though. That's all from this shameless author! Hope you enjoy the book!

Pft! Of course I was going to leave a shameless review. I do want my book to get enough exposure afterall. That being said though, this is my very first book and I would be super grateful if you all could support me and help to make this story better. I also urge you to point out any flaws, plot holes and anything you find odd about the novel. Your feedback really will go a long way. Criticism is nice and all but do not break my fickle heart. I beg of you. Constructive criticism will be very much appreciated though. That's all from this shameless author! Hope you enjoy the book!

Author please can you write a auxiliary chapter on the magic system of this novel including mystic gem, elixier field and soul ranks, slots for magic gems and all, please that would solve many problems of the readers as they can understand it better beforehand. And please also explain which magic talent absorb how much mana from the consumed resources with little details in single auxiliary chapter. I liked the novel very much. but please release the chapter if you find my suggestion good enough. And give reply to this review so i can understand your reason of not releasing such chapter before. And thank you for giving such masterpiece.

Thank you. But who recommended this story.

thank you.