Review Detail of Genesis_Hale in Level-Up through Laughter

Pft! Of course I was going to leave a shameless review. I do want my book to get enough exposure afterall. That being said though, this is my very first book and I would be super grateful if you all could support me and help to make this story better. I also urge you to point out any flaws, plot holes and anything you find odd about the novel. Your feedback really will go a long way. Criticism is nice and all but do not break my fickle heart. I beg of you. Constructive criticism will be very much appreciated though. That's all from this shameless author! Hope you enjoy the book!