Grand_Red

The story is excellent; I love the background and how Slade develops throughout the chapters, as well as how we see the personalities of the other characters. Highly recommended, and I can't wait for more chapters.

You're absolutely right, and I hadn't realized that. Maybe I should rewatch the series to remember what it was like, to enjoy it once more. The use of AI is very noticeable, and the love for writing isn't apparent in its application, but I'm still enjoying it a little. The ideas are good, but the way the AI ​​is used is poorly executed. Anyway, everyone has their own opinion, and I respect everyone's. Have a good day, and thanks for correcting me. 😊

The fic is good; the use of AI is a bit too obvious in some parts, but it doesn't ruin the story. There are a few writing errors, like giving Vogler hair out of nowhere and making him white when I know he's bald, but it's a minor mistake. The fic is good, and I really liked the ideas of giving him a mind palace, the transparent world, and social deduction. Highly recommended; one of the good fics among the very limited House M.D. fanfics out there.

Thanks for the chapter 😊😊😊😊

Thanks for the chapter 🥰

1.-That ikari finds a way to make cuts like sukuna (not necessarily as a cursed technique but as another way to use her airbending). 2.-If ikari reaches a point where she can (or if she already knows how) use steambending to enhance her blows and attacks like Naruto, or like a steam engine, by expelling steam from her body through her pores. 3.-That ikari with her airbending, can generate wind in the palm of her hand constantly and in constant movement, like a rasengan, which then over time evolves into a rasen shuriken

It is one of the best fanfics I have ever read (in my simple and plain opinion). I feel that it has broadened my thinking and what I know about One Piece (I am not a complete fanboy but I like it a lot) both in terms of power scales, abilities and many other things and I want to thank the author for creating it. And even if you abandon it or decide not to update it, I respect your decision and I will keep the good memories you left me and many others of suspense or joy from reading this fanfic. Thank you

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