Darks_Phoenix

Well, it's really making me angry and I don't know what the hero wants. I've wasted time on this nonsense.

I will say that the concept of the story is wonderful and the writer is doing well, but I find MC very submissive at the beginning of the story. He accepts everything without objection. He seems like a puppet that they give instructions to. But what really disappointed me was Damon and how he killed his mother, and then he comes back and tells the hero that he is sorry, and so on. This is nonsense, and MC is like an idiot after 16. A year gives him a scar and we are done. The writer did not leave room for the hero to know the true story, as no one knows how she really died. This is what disappointed me, even though the writer was very good.

I have read a lot of fan stories, and frankly, I was tired of some authors stopping from completing the novels. Even when I read this novel, it was to waste time and I did not think it was complete, but the author proved me wrong to make me see one of the best fan stories that made me smile with all.my heart. Thank you for that.

A very wonderful story in terms of writing, the development of the world, and the development of the characters in it. I advise everyone who wants a quiet novel that ignites enthusiasm in reading this story. I only hope that the writer does not drop it in the same way as many successful novels. In the end, thank you for this wonderful story.

Thanks for the chapter and I hope the updates increase

The idea of ​​the novel is wonderful, but the writer made MC seem like he did not have the ability to change many things, such as preventing the death of Elia Martell and her children, in order to gain Martell's gratitude and ensure their alliance with him. Another example is the death of Lyanna. He could have prevented her death, but the writer made MC seem as if he did not know where she was kidnappedI suggest that the writer rewrite the novel from the beginning, in detail, and without very quick time breaks, because the idea of ​​the novel is very wonderful