Amazing! In the first chapter i had the Mafia romance vibes, but as the story paced it also put Emotions like Sadness and pity for Characters.
Keep it up, and there are a few mistakes in Punctuation and Dialogues. You can fix them just by giving them a re-read
The story is developing really nicely since it's the start but Readers can tell that the story is pacing really nicely. (Loved the bit of humour you added.) I really liked it keep it up.
I honestly found the Characters kinda Cute, Beside that the novel is really capable of keeping a reader on track, It is one of the amazing novels i have read nowadays. Keep it up <3
The book is really gripping and the way the emotions (especially Pain) are explained is truely amazing and fascinating. Keep it up and Waiting for the update <3
SUPER AMAZING! Not really a fan of the supernatural but the way author got me hooked on this story is so so amazing.
+It's rare to see books with such strong female leads
It really got me hooked since the first chapter, The way you make the storyline unfold is worth appreciating dear, It is also such a unique story. I really love it. (Waiting for update) <3
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Thankyou so much, please consider adding it to your library and voting too.
It will help me alot.
I can't get over this story honestly, and the writing style is so catchy and Shocking, as a person who is not into this category even I am getting so interest.