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DaoistthV4aQ

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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
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    Amazing! In the first chapter i had the Mafia romance vibes, but as the story paced it also put Emotions like Sadness and pity for Characters. Keep it up, and there are a few mistakes in Punctuation and Dialogues. You can fix them just by giving them a re-read

    barely attached by fate
    Urban · mahe_ale_aba
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    The story is developing really nicely since it's the start but Readers can tell that the story is pacing really nicely. (Loved the bit of humour you added.) I really liked it keep it up.

    A Gun in Another World
    Fantasy · Sie_Ryu
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    I honestly found the Characters kinda Cute, Beside that the novel is really capable of keeping a reader on track, It is one of the amazing novels i have read nowadays. Keep it up <3

    I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain
    Fantasy · NewbieJimjim
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Replied to Sie_Ryu

    I am so sorry for misconvenience, Can you point a Something out as an example so i can improve, Please it will help me alot

    Mr Nightmare's Ex.
    Urban · DaoistthV4aQ
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    Amazing story, It is such interesting yet confusing story, Haven't read such one in the genre of vampires, I enjoyed it so much, keep it up.

    My vampire enemy
    Fantasy · redlady
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    The book is really gripping and the way the emotions (especially Pain) are explained is truely amazing and fascinating. Keep it up and Waiting for the update <3

    The Lord of the Demons
    Fantasy · OnlyShrimp
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    The story is keeping the grip even tho It's just started and the characters development is amazing, I really loved the writing style as well.

    Restarted again
    Fantasy · Emmanuelboss36_
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    SUPER AMAZING! Not really a fan of the supernatural but the way author got me hooked on this story is so so amazing. +It's rare to see books with such strong female leads

    Find Me, In Another Place And Time
    Fantasy · femme_fatale
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Replied to XOXO_LtlSunFlwr

    I am so sorry to ask, but will you mind leaving a review and ratings please? I am a beginner I really need that. <3

    Ch 1 Heaven to the hell
    Mr Nightmare's Ex.
    Urban · DaoistthV4aQ
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    It really got me hooked since the first chapter, The way you make the storyline unfold is worth appreciating dear, It is also such a unique story. I really love it. (Waiting for update) <3

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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Replied to XOXO_LtlSunFlwr

    Thankyou so much, please consider adding it to your library and voting too. It will help me alot.

    Ch 1 Heaven to the hell
    Mr Nightmare's Ex.
    Urban · DaoistthV4aQ
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Posted

    I can't get over this story honestly, and the writing style is so catchy and Shocking, as a person who is not into this category even I am getting so interest.

    Blood Moon Hunter in the Vampire Apocalypse
    Fantasy · DragonKnov
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  • DaoistthV4aQ
    DaoistthV4aQ11mth
    Commented

    It's getting interesting and interesting dear.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Aetheria's Reward
    Blood Moon Hunter in the Vampire Apocalypse
    Fantasy · DragonKnov
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