Review Detail of Sie_Ryu in Mr Nightmare's Ex.

Item: Mr Nightmare's Ex.
Rating: 4

Review detail

Sie_RyuLv211mthSie_Ryu

Your story is great the plot is good and the characters are great as well, but the problem is the grammar, you probably get this a lot, but if you improve your grammar in writing I'm sure your novel will make it big someday. :D

Mr Nightmare's Ex.

DaoistthV4aQ

Liked it!

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DaoistthV4aQAuthorDaoistthV4aQ

I am so sorry for misconvenience, Can you point a Something out as an example so i can improve, Please it will help me alot

11mth

Sie_RyuLv2Sie_Ryu

There's nothing wrong with the novel itself, you just have yo fix the grammar, and trust me you will get more review, and put cliffhangers so the readers have no choice but to read more hehehe.[img=strong][img=recommend]

DaoistthV4aQ:I am so sorry for misconvenience, Can you point a Something out as an example so i can improve, Please it will help me alot

11mth