LokiStormHead

Drawing quality is satisfying, and the plot is fun.

Story features typical misconceptions about feminism, main character is quite childish, antagonists are violent for no reason, and magic is vague and uninspired. I give this an average rating since it was still fun to read. Hopefully the quality goes up in future.

Remove the second "had".

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Don't place a fullstop at the end of quotations if a dialogue tag will be utilised. Do this instead: "There's no need to be so humble, Miss Alice," responded Lucius.

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"As you know, Bob..."

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Okay, it's very likely that the author is not good with English. But if that's the case, why hasn't he gotten a beta reader to help There are many people in the inkstone discord server who'd be willing to assist. The first chapter is a headache to read: odd punctuation, bad grammar. Hopefully, the author fixes it in future. But for now, I am giving it 1 star.

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