Like from chapter 8 to chapter 9 what happened there? Were did he go? Where did the monsters come from? I feel like you unknowingly deleted some KEY PARTS to help readers understand and follow the plot.

I'm sorry maybe there's something wrong on my end l. But I literally cannot follow the story I can't seem to find what's going on. Like is there some way I have to read it because this is and I'm being serious this most hard to follow story I have ever seen. Maybe you edited some parts out or something because truly I can't figure out the story at all!