Hazy_0832
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actually it's a really good advice. thanks! and thank you for your kind words. Many people started to read it, which kinda pushed me into writing more of it. guess I'm a clout chaser. But I do strive to be a guy who can finish what he started. and considering the main character is an OC of mine, it definitely gives me some sort of push, so don't worry too much. really glad you enjoyed the story!
Thanks for the high review. Here's some clarifications. **BEWARE, SPOILERS BELOW** 0. Regarding the story being a mix of worlds, I am planning to change the name soon. It was originally intended as a commission for just the first one, but I continued it when I saw how much people began to read. if you enjoyed the story until chapter 21, I fail to see how that was a problem for you. 1. You wrote that there are magical artifacts, but that was clarified in the latest chapter that there wasn't. It was the person. 2. I am unsure if that was a complaint or not; about them being nymphomaniacs, but they are taken from a manga where they are, in fact, nymphomaniacs. About them being "Promiscuous", that's a blatant lie. A woman can find another man appealing without cheating or having relationships with said man. 3. I never mentioned anything about the main character's sexuality or that the mom or his sister are romantically attracted to him, at least this far. I also don't appreciate his sexuality being a thing to complain about, honestly. If this is going to be a bother for you, drop the novel, since it isn't for you. REGARDING THE MOM AND SISTER; 4. His sister was flustered by the stunt he pulled and had no idea how to deal with the situation, so she just gave in to his advances when she saw how unrelenting he was, since she was unprepared for his uncharacteristic behavior. afterward, she became conscious of him because of said stunt, and had no idea what to think. does not mean she loves him in that way. (Just because you were jumpscared by something, does not mean you are afraid of it) 5. And as for the mom; not every parent that feels their child is different all of a sudden, worries about them, and feels surprised for the better and proud in their newfound confidence is sexually attracted to them.
Look, my guy. I suggested it because it seemed to really bother you. so to save yourself time, just stop reading the novel, because that's something I won't change. of course, you said afterwards it was just a joke, so I just moved on.
A spineless coward? Van? If you're saying that, I'm sorry, but you didn't pay full attention to the story.
besides, he was angry at them. he even says this when they take off his runes. But the point in that scene is that he shouldn't hold a grudge over something they had no control over. they help him NOW, and care about him NOW. there's no reason for him to just reject it because they slept with his friend 16 years ago.
I appreciate your honest review. Allow me to give you my take. Van is in a world where he has a passive that makes everyone distrust him. Magus would be the main character in said world with all his unfair stuff. he used his abilities to help Vam escape being a punching bag for the knights, so he also owes him for taking him along. Van has lived a majority of his life in that world being untrusted, dying repetitively, and being betrayed. he most likely isn't new to betrayal given his passive. He was so broken when Alicia did it, because he didn't expect her to do that, majorly because she was a demon who isn't supposed to be affected by buffs and passives. Now, while Van cared about Amoria, he also cared about his friend. He didn't want to leave him because he seemed really desperate. that and also because he owes him. Now, put yourself in the shoes of his friend. he has passives that he can't control. he really did not want to ruin Van's love life. he even mentions he purposely went somewhere private to mourn a party member that died so that his Passive wouldn't affect Amoria. Amoria found him by chance, and it happened. he was emotionally vulnerable, so he didn't have the strength to refuse. as for the rest of the girls, pay attention. With ALL of Magus's buffs, one of them still cared enough to offer Van to join them. They really did care about him, but they physically couldn't be on his side while they were a party because they just couldn't control their own feelings due to his friend's passives. with Magus dying, they now have control of said feelings. Van understands this, so he has nothing to pay Magus back for. why would he go for revenge over something Magus had no control over? Magus was surrounded by beautiful women, so much, in fact, that he was overwhelmed. in the first 2 or 3 chapters he even insisted not to add any new girl members if you recall, because that was just too much for him. Amoria and the rest really did miss Van. Because with Magus gone, they can now process their feelins for Van and their regrets. And Van, (at least at the latest chapter) was just after an emotional breakdown. He needs company. And who's better than people who can fully understand him and his pain? I hope this clears things up a bit. Thanks for reading.