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The writer's writing quality is good, I just don't like some things. The novel has magical elements and is a mix of different worlds and characters. The mix makes the story a little confusing. There is magic, magical artifacts, and the protagonist is a copy of a shounen manga. The women are promiscuous, especially the women close to the protagonist, the mother and sister are nymphomaniacs and are attracted to the protagonist, but the protagonist is asexual or gay.

Anti-NTR Man: Kokujin No Tenkousei NTR Ru VERSUS

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actually it's a really good advice. thanks! and thank you for your kind words. Many people started to read it, which kinda pushed me into writing more of it. guess I'm a clout chaser. But I do strive to be a guy who can finish what he started. and considering the main character is an OC of mine, it definitely gives me some sort of push, so don't worry too much. really glad you enjoyed the story!

Bob_Uchiha_XD:🙄 But, this is manga hentai. So, logic hentai. The novel is fanfic - hentai. It's not a criticism, I just pointed out something that I personally don't like very much; but that doesn't mean the story is bad, it's good. The characters are hentai, the women are jealous females looking for a tough man to fertilize them, so the protagonist's actions must consider that aspect of the women, his women. Lastly, I have seen many writers who combine different worlds and their characters, unfortunately they end up abandoning their work because it becomes too complicated to write the plot. Consider not trying to chew more than you can swallow.
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Thanks for the high review. Here's some clarifications. **BEWARE, SPOILERS BELOW** 0. Regarding the story being a mix of worlds, I am planning to change the name soon. It was originally intended as a commission for just the first one, but I continued it when I saw how much people began to read. if you enjoyed the story until chapter 21, I fail to see how that was a problem for you. 1. You wrote that there are magical artifacts, but that was clarified in the latest chapter that there wasn't. It was the person. 2. I am unsure if that was a complaint or not; about them being nymphomaniacs, but they are taken from a manga where they are, in fact, nymphomaniacs. About them being "Promiscuous", that's a blatant lie. A woman can find another man appealing without cheating or having relationships with said man. 3. I never mentioned anything about the main character's sexuality or that the mom or his sister are romantically attracted to him, at least this far. I also don't appreciate his sexuality being a thing to complain about, honestly. If this is going to be a bother for you, drop the novel, since it isn't for you. REGARDING THE MOM AND SISTER; 4. His sister was flustered by the stunt he pulled and had no idea how to deal with the situation, so she just gave in to his advances when she saw how unrelenting he was, since she was unprepared for his uncharacteristic behavior. afterward, she became conscious of him because of said stunt, and had no idea what to think. does not mean she loves him in that way. (Just because you were jumpscared by something, does not mean you are afraid of it) 5. And as for the mom; not every parent that feels their child is different all of a sudden, worries about them, and feels surprised for the better and proud in their newfound confidence is sexually attracted to them.

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🙄 But, this is manga hentai. So, logic hentai. The novel is fanfic - hentai. It's not a criticism, I just pointed out something that I personally don't like very much; but that doesn't mean the story is bad, it's good. The characters are hentai, the women are jealous females looking for a tough man to fertilize them, so the protagonist's actions must consider that aspect of the women, his women. Lastly, I have seen many writers who combine different worlds and their characters, unfortunately they end up abandoning their work because it becomes too complicated to write the plot. Consider not trying to chew more than you can swallow.

Hazy_0832:Thanks for the high review. Here's some clarifications. **BEWARE, SPOILERS BELOW** 0. Regarding the story being a mix of worlds, I am planning to change the name soon. It was originally intended as a commission for just the first one, but I continued it when I saw how much people began to read. if you enjoyed the story until chapter 21, I fail to see how that was a problem for you. 1. You wrote that there are magical artifacts, but that was clarified in the latest chapter that there wasn't. It was the person. 2. I am unsure if that was a complaint or not; about them being nymphomaniacs, but they are taken from a manga where they are, in fact, nymphomaniacs. About them being "Promiscuous", that's a blatant lie. A woman can find another man appealing without cheating or having relationships with said man. 3. I never mentioned anything about the main character's sexuality or that the mom or his sister are romantically attracted to him, at least this far. I also don't appreciate his sexuality being a thing to complain about, honestly. If this is going to be a bother for you, drop the novel, since it isn't for you. REGARDING THE MOM AND SISTER; 4. His sister was flustered by the stunt he pulled and had no idea how to deal with the situation, so she just gave in to his advances when she saw how unrelenting he was, since she was unprepared for his uncharacteristic behavior. afterward, she became conscious of him because of said stunt, and had no idea what to think. does not mean she loves him in that way. (Just because you were jumpscared by something, does not mean you are afraid of it) 5. And as for the mom; not every parent that feels their child is different all of a sudden, worries about them, and feels surprised for the better and proud in their newfound confidence is sexually attracted to them.