Random_Champ

this is what the comedy book should be like 😂😂😂😂

author is compensating for real life😂😂😂😂😂

it's very good ,and the story feels very natural ,it doesn't just keep on making every one antagonist,rather shows the reality

story is very good with nice realistic plot and nice peaceful end❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯❤️❤️❤️

it was really best fan fic with good story and end

people seems to forget that executioner blade always has sharp edge means no matter if it's start or the end of battle its sharpness will always remain peak ,that it self makes a lot of difference,for anology think you fighting a stronger opponent in every strike your blade gets chiped than with some blows your sword will have problem performing cuts ,in its case that won't happen

it's a little slow pace but it's good ,i really love your unique perspective of team change that was the best part ,I also liked the way u make Naruto intelligent stil he is loud mouth ,it needs little refining but other wise very good 👍👍👍👍👍

it's amazing 😻🤩🤩i really love the theme and the story is amazing,fuck fate , keep up the good work

the story writing is so good that even if I hate the story I still read it author: i know you hate sarutobi but please don't make mc life so difficult ,try to make it more normal , your theme is really good 👍, in Naruto world strength makes everything so if his strength increases hokage or anyone will not try to make him an enemy, the plot has many similarities to cultivation novels pls change that mentality, overall really good

no game no life ,it has one of the most unique perspective, with it you can show a very different type of talent as well as the story will not have sense of cliche story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]