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Leitor voraz. Apreciador de uma boa escrita, de um bom enredo e de uma leitura imersiva. Odiador ferrenho de Sistemas e Haréns.
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HekAnw_17hCommentedComentário: A forma de nomeação com nome completo todas as vezes em que os personagens são mencionados é IRRITANTE, salvo em primeiros encontros onde é necessário apresentar o personagem. TODO MUNDO JÁ SABEM QUEM SÃO, e 98% dos autores comentem tal erro. Então abster-se de cometer tal escrutínio ortográfico repetitivo seria muito bom tanto quanto para evitar a 'poluição' gramatical do texto.
Your Reviews and Comments about my work are welcomed- HekAnw_17hCommented
Crítica: Não deveria estragar seu personagem com ações estúpidas ou comportamento que não condiz com a personalidade dele. Por mais que ele seja um mini soldado ninja, uma certa maturidade lhe cairia bem, já que tem alma velha.
Your Reviews and Comments about my work are welcomed - HekAnw_17hCommented
Como é que os autores SEMPRE dão um jeito de estragarem seus personagens?! Mano... chega a dar dor de barriga.
'How does he know about the Mangekyo?' The figure wondered. - HekAnw_17hCommented
Personagem patético...
"What's the Mangekyo Sharingan?" Kaito asked. - HekAnw_18hCommented
Fogo + Vento = Liberação de Explosão, ou algo semelhante á P'li de Avatar Korra.
'What does this mean? Does it mean I have two chakra natures? Maybe that was the amalgamation of both results. Fire and Wind huh, can't say I'm disappointed. They are both good natures. At the very least, I'll be fast and pack a punch.' - HekAnw_1dCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5
- HekAnw_1dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
- HekAnw_1dCommentedCh 3 Hollow System
- HekAnw_2dCommentedCh 3 Ch 2. Unexpected rescue.
- HekAnw_2dCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3: Bleach?
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Melhor que sonhar ou cuspir sangue: Ter um desvio de Qi, criar um demônio do coração e cuspir sangue com órgãos.
If anyone could see this scene, happening in front of the forest, they might witness a 3.6 feet tall child playing and laughing surrounded by four 6.6 feet tall wolves, where they seemed more like puppies as they wagged their tails and played with the child than terrible beasts that would kill any man. They would basically wonder if they were dreaming and spit blood because it was a sight that anyone in this world would find surreal. - HekAnw_3dCommented
Oh sim, um jovem mestre completamente renascido, pele de jade, lisa e suave, olhos de estrelas, dentes de pérolas, lábios vermelhos como uma flor de cerejeira e sobrancelhas de espadas com nariz afiado.
Apart from that, mentally and even spiritually, I felt completely different. The ground where I had fallen in front of the tree was damp with a black liquid and somewhat dark blood, both mine. The liquid had sweated out like sweat, and the blood came in the midst of my nosebleed. Somehow, I knew that these fluids were like impurities from my body because after releasing these things from me, I felt as if I had slept for a week. I was light and in a state of fullness. All the anger and despair in me had a much lighter weight now. I could only thank the entities that brought me here. - HekAnw_3dCommented
Nossa, é grande. Eu gosto. hehe
[Chapter Size: 5758 Words] - HekAnw_4dCommentedCh 2 New World
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ah não, o espectador oculto continua aparecendo. aff.
"I didn't plan on speaking to you again, though your actions will be quite dangerous for yourself, so I felt the need to stop you. The fate you are attempting to interfere with is engraved into the fabric of the universe that you are in, and only if you are able to either manipulate fate directly with the Time Stone, become a Principality who can transcend fate, or modify fate with powerful magic, your actions could cause your own destruction. While you can make changes to the world, any hostile actions will cause fate to actively attempt to destroy you. It will be up to you now." - HekAnw_4dCommented
nossa, terremos árvores violentas em breve hahahaha
The meeting went by quickly, with the tree deciding on how they were going to combat Moryo. - HekAnw_4dCommented
Não. Ela não é a mãe aranha. é Ungoliant que é a mãe aranha, a rainha aranha, o chefe secreto do mundo, aquela que fez Melkor berrar em socorro.
A 1% increase? Artel was puzzled. Who was this Shelob? He glanced at the summoned space area and was taken aback. "Isn't this Shelob? The mother spider? So her name is Shelob?"