Above_Pinnacles

The novel is a nice one. Its plot shows the author's great imaginative capacity. But your chapter is very long. At most, a moderate chapter should have about 1500 words. I guess you should do some editing too. Your AE should tell you more.

Thanks. I'll recheck and update it.

Thanks for an honest review. It's much appreciated.

It's a beautiful one. Honestly, I didn't believe a game-into-real life story would be this good. But am looking forward to you doing better. Kudos

Thanks for your response. It's well appreciated

It's an excellent story with quite a complicated plot at the beginning which is good. Our protagonist is doing just well. Apart from the your choice of name, I say thumbs up 👍👍

A boy got a lucky encounter with a lost part of the Ancient Fire Dragon. This will help on his journey in the martial arts world. It's an intriguing story, filled with plot, deceit, suspense and a lot of other interesting stuff. If you love action and romance all in one, this one is for you.

Our true friends are those that accept us the way we are.

The weight of the moon? Seriously?!

Thanks for your support.