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now that's a twist I wasn't expecting. good work bro. keep it up.
The corruption was too quick. You should have taken your time with it. You should have done other parts with little parts on how Sam was being corrupted. You could have made it awesome. You lack experience (Also me) But keep it up.
Oh! Didn't know that.
I thought it would be FireLord298 or something. Not these Chinese names. Because it doesn't fit, have you ever seen anyone do this?
Others were right. This is stupid.
This is those Chinese cultivation stories but it is Dragon Ball. That's the only difference. Otherwise it is no different than a cultivation story with bad writing.
Not gonna lie but This is bulls**t. The concept is interesting but THIS one devers no star. As one review said, MC is all over the place. Right now MC is in Avenger 1 then suddenly he is in Avenger EndGame. Those who gave it 5 stars are bots.
The ultimate final villain
here I thought we will get silk with quantum powers
quantum spider man