best of the best writing never seen anything like it. The author is truly amazing I have read 3 books made by this guy and they are all superb

don't let me beg you sexpun we understand that your a good writer give me what I want give us what we want

see author ....what ever you call yourself, if you do not upload this chapter 🫥I will kill you okay think about that👿👿👿👺

you people are being one-sided I mean she's running away with his child and his heart that's awful☺️

whyyyyyyy, listen here and listen clear Author-san but if you stop that beautiful relationship from happening I will file a law suit and let's see how eliezer and Jillyanna will end up together see

good stuff☺️

rest well for me I can't bear to see you suffer!!

hii guys so it's not how I exactly planned my posting schedule to be I am bloody sorry for all this but I promise I'll make it up to you exams are the worst am I right

the story was so captivating I certainly hope he does it

why say that?🤨 even though it was written by a seven year old it doesn't give you no shitting right to criticize it I mean if the writer was so young wouldn't it affect his feelings don't be worthless and next time if you see a book and you don't like it look away and don't put down your objectively shitty feelings 😒

seemingly a good one well done I like the plot and all your a good writer give me a call sometime let's talk

keep on posting dude am not getting any younger here😀

you guys are lucky man have you read some other stories in this webnovel you might as well call this the best writing ever😂😂❤️

well I feel your use of English was just right please don't listen to that discouraging review and I like how you make it sound right you know the lesb shit so bravo keep writing ✌️✌️❤️

keep writing your one of the good ones you know

keep it up

tell the artist involved to give me a call 😏😏❤️you know what I mean ha great stuff

you sound childish this book is alright man ✌️

the book is straight up weird but I love it so much I wish I could unlock the remaining chapters😭😭especially chapter 1😏

omg still reading this book it's awesome and I thought I could write😆😆🥺