Relax, this is just the beginning, he’s pretty much the same Rimuru but is more cold/logical for certain enemies, yet he retains his kind and playful nature. Cant really say anymore, other than his character traits have yet to be fully shown because like I said before, it’s still the beginning.

Got the start of the premise from Luxuriant, thought it was an interesting idea. And since Rimuru was one of my favorite characters, I decided to write a story about him. But one thing that bugged me, was his personality that was pretty much a push over unless pushed to the extreme. I feel like he underestimates his capabilities too much, and is too forgiving in certain instances. Which is also understanding bc he was just a normal 9-5 man in the past. Nevertheless, this fanfic will be a story about a Rimuru that has more pride as a king, and actually pursues power, not to mention he’ll also use his future memories properly. Well that’s all, hope you can enjoy the story!

Sure buddy

Sure buddy

You said, “But don’t act like a child and insult him.” You were insinuating that only a child would insult someone over that. Well, meh, could care less. This argument is a waste of time, so ciao.

And you just did it again, telling me that I can’t tell you, “I write what I want”. But it’s cool, no point in arguing over something so mundane.

Your quite the hypocrite aren’t you?😂 You replied to my earlier reply with another insult, calling me a child. How can you, someone who is doing the same thing, critisize me? I was definitely a bit condescending, but I never blatantly insulted him, like you did to me. Regardless, this argument is going nowhere, so have a good rest of a day, and f*ck off💀

But I will ask, when did I insult him? I simply said I understand his view, but he will not tell me how to write my character. Feedback is something logical, like gramma mistakes, plot mistakes, etc. What he was telling me was compulsory, in the sense that he wants my character to act how he likes. No reader has the authority to dictate how an author’s character should act, nonetheless I was respectful the entire time. So don’t try and act as if I being disrespectful😂

Sure, if that’s what you think.

I understand that, but your feedback was simply how you felt the main character should be, that’s not really feedback, but rather your opinion. I’m looking for logical facts on how my fanfic needs to improve.

I see you where your coming from, but you can’t tell me how my character should act, that’s just a no-brainer😂 He will be how I want him to be. As for your other statements, their all things I disagree with. Like I told the others, when I say feedback, I mean constructive criticism, not how you feel the story should be, that’s not your role, I’ll write how I see fit. So just enjoy the story!

Yeah, that’s a given, increasing his intelligence level and his overall knowledge and skill won’t be too hard, as he will eventually not need the System’s blueprints. And eventually start creating his own unique Armor designs.

It will soon be explained in next chapter.

Sure, he could make it in the future since it’s one of Tony’s creations, but as for whether or not he’d actually use it is a different matter. Eventually once he reaches the highest level, the system would be useless, as his knowledge and kill in engineering would be unrivaled.

Yeah it’ll be a mixture of MCU and Comic!

No, but perhaps in the future he’ll travel to Marvel, who knows🤷‍♂️

I’ll write it the way I want to💀 And as for the MC being in Gotham, the reasoning will soon be explained.

No offense bro, but I’ll be the deciding factor on that. And if I were to do it, it’d be something within the realm of possibility. Either way, just relax and enjoy the story, if you have more questions, I’m all for it.