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Writing quality:The quality of the work is good enough to binge read (waiting for more chapters:) Story development: The first four chapters I read really set the tone for me, and told me what I was in for. Character design:I like how mahoraga is not some brainless beast, but actually a character with some form of intelligence and personality to him.
Indeed, the tension falls short.
I wonder will this Ian meet the Ian of the future(emperor)
So much politics, no magic? Still good chapter tho 😊
what is Ian's immediate goal?
Good chapter
It might as well be, now that dmad lord is dead.
Because dmad lord is bullying the void universe