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- Le0_08 months agoReplied to Rayanghost
Can you elaborate? Kolussos has the skill [sage], that is the precursor to rimuru's [great sage]. It's not conscious and can't speak to the user like [great sage] can.
- Le0_08 months agoReplied to Rayanghost
I believe I described her in the first chapter. I have tried generating AI images of her, but because of her unique features, like the single eye, the AI doesnt generate her correctly. Thank you ao much for reading and engaging with my story.
- Le0_08 months agoReplied to Rayanghost
From the 4th chapter forward, all chapters will have short paragraphs. I might rewrite the first 3 ones in the future. Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion.
- Le0_08 months agoCommented
Image not necessarily 100% according to the story.
- Le0_08 months agoCommented
Image not necessarily 100% according to the story.
- Le0_08 months agoCommented
- Le0_09 months agoReplied to Vedora_Tempest
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This paragraph has been deleted. - Le0_09 months agoReplied to Vedora_Tempest
I've been reading fanfiction for a while, and I've noticed that, indeed, FF authors tend to write in very short sentences. While I haven't read actual normal books recently, I remember that they use longer paragraphs like I did in this story. Is this simply a stylistic choice, does it actually bother the reader, or am I wrong about the longer paragraph books? Thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate all criticism.
