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I understand that. I often read novels or fanfictions were the mc gets overpowered in the first 3 chapters and then just exploits that. He doesn't really struggle, which is a whole side of a character the reader can't connect through. Imagine I you don't know what he would do in desperate times. I try to keep my mc as real as possible, but feel free to stop me if I should go to far. This goes for all readers of course.
Thank you very much. I will correct them in the coming week. Hope it hasn't influenced your joy while reading.
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My knowledge is based on the books, but I regularly check with the fanwiki and it said she graduated the June 1991, but Harry started in September. But as always I could be wrong, so if anybody has news on that, please answer our confusion.
Hey there,to answer some questions without spoiling anything, here a rundown to your questions.MC doesn't know yet which timeline he is in, but finds some clues in the next couple of chapters.He hasn't made his goals clear as he needs time to adjust, before knowing what he wants to do.He didn't had an opportunity of looking in a mirror right after coming out or in a workshop, but you'll find out soon.There will be a romantic interest, but it will take a few years, as he is only 12 now. Well at least his body is. Other things have a higher priority. Find it good your interested and hope for more questions or feedback.
Yes, you are right. I simply made the choice so they could get the answer themselves. But in his view the stones features aren't valuable, yet something else is. And at least he says his answer would be a minority in front of the stone. But thanks, maybe I should have used a different phrasing.
Thanks for the feedback. I planned his lost drive for archeology to come back and a romance, but maybe I should make some changes to his thinking or different developments after encounters. Anyway, thanks for your honest feedback, it really helps.
Well for once, the mc wasn't that interested in the conflict and was more inclined to getting pets. And I'm sure he already used 'Shared Sense' a while back. If you're wondering: Is that all?; then you must continue to read. Hope I could answer your concerns.
Yes you are right. But I get him there for future plot and used his recommendation by the guild employee as he is only a kid at the point. Hope you understand that I need to make some changes to integrate the mc into the world