TheTryant

love the character and story but what I don't like about this is how the author feels the need to insert the hard r and the n word for no reason??? I'm no some snowflake but I just wanna read my story without reading racial slurs it isn't like the author is black but his only excuses is the character race like sure bubbles is black he still isn't about to say NI**ER for no reason lmao and yes I'm black

your not black bro this is just weird to read gang

"i'll be able to rival a kage" as you start yapping about six path tier? this makes near 0 sense you try to sound smart fighting a brickwall i legit made a new account to show u how stupid this sounded no where did the author insulate that kage=six path using my basic understanding of scaling kage level and naruto when he reached kage are entire different things during this time period kage level would not be as high

definitely have potential bro I can see that you could do alot more tbh but well see if this gets 100 views I hope it does because I'm kinda into this one