The book's currently paused and needs a lot of reworking. So you guys might expect some unedited chapters from here on.

Unique read and has potential, Li Wei has been soul-swapped with a guy's body in an urban cultivation world. The amazing part was the updates per chapter speed was insane. Has to work on some sentence flow but overall it was good. Keep it up author!

Oh, that explains the confusing use of pronouns. May I suggest kindly that just use their original pronouns? Especially since it was their POV. Deep inside, they still claim themselves as the original right. I'm not familiar with gender swap troupe so I could be wrong. Good luck!

Suggestion: "Her" closest friend, betrayed "her"

She's a she right? Suggestion: A vibrant young "woman".

To warm the climate is to not mix hot and cold but solely hot. Suggestion: "As if the devil was playing with hellfire to warm the climate."

What's a test-free breakfast? I tried googling it but nothing came. Is it just simply free breakfast?

Fantastic first three chapters! No problem with the flow of the sentences, good job on that! One thing lacking was the depths of emotions. Instead of just saying this character was enthralled by the beauty of this view, how about showing it how? Like he reaches for the sky seemingly bewitched by the grand sky. Something like that, overall. Great work bro :)

Great description, was able to imagine the scene very easily!

Are we practicing the dao of word count here? The previous sentences in the first chapter were repeated here. No biggie tho xD

That was quite flawless :O

Bro! Awesome start! A bit short though, it seems this one is more of a prologue.

What more do you want? Dual cultivation, kingdom toppling beauties, and your strong MC Aditya with a system. If you want to relax and simply enjoy an eventful cultivation/xianxia novel, then you're in the right book <3

A unique writing style of blending past and current events but what really captivates me is the interaction between characters, we have the silly yet realistic friends of ML and FL. Has good stability updates no doubt. We're just starting but the story's flow was good so far. Great job author!

Great four chapters so far! The start was okay with the cliche MC got betrayed by her spouse during a deathly dole. We haven't seen much yet but it's quite anticipating where the futuristic world could take our dear Scarlet Su to. Writing style-wise, just the right amount of detailing, and would want you to read more. Keep it up, author!

"of those" has been used twice.

In writing style, the detailing was impeccable without a doubt, as seen in how many good reviews it has. The updates have been consistent in the last 7 chapters. The world will suck you in and will enthrall you in the feeling of being an assassin, great world-building, to say the least. We have seen few integral characters yet but they were unique on their own, so it's a plus for that.

A quick review: Has little to no grammar errors that could be ignored. The flow of the story was engaging as we followed Ryan in his tidings of survival and awakening to the harsh reality of betrayal. A good start for 4 chapters.

"until it disappointed back." Was it an error? My suggestions: until it disappeared back or until it dispersed back

5-star review from yours truly the author Devious Biscuit. Finally, we've reached above 15k words. A small achievement yet something to be happy about for a small author like me. I'll put the other story on pause and focus on this older novel of mine, SCP. Do expect a little kingdom-building from scratch and if anyone asked, there won't be a harem in this book.