TheFilthyRhymer

The book's currently paused and needs a lot of reworking. So you guys might expect some unedited chapters from here on.

Unique read and has potential, Li Wei has been soul-swapped with a guy's body in an urban cultivation world. The amazing part was the updates per chapter speed was insane. Has to work on some sentence flow but overall it was good. Keep it up author!

Oh, that explains the confusing use of pronouns. May I suggest kindly that just use their original pronouns? Especially since it was their POV. Deep inside, they still claim themselves as the original right. I'm not familiar with gender swap troupe so I could be wrong. Good luck!

Suggestion: "Her" closest friend, betrayed "her"

She's a she right? Suggestion: A vibrant young "woman".

To warm the climate is to not mix hot and cold but solely hot. Suggestion: "As if the devil was playing with hellfire to warm the climate."

What's a test-free breakfast? I tried googling it but nothing came. Is it just simply free breakfast?

Fantastic first three chapters! No problem with the flow of the sentences, good job on that! One thing lacking was the depths of emotions. Instead of just saying this character was enthralled by the beauty of this view, how about showing it how? Like he reaches for the sky seemingly bewitched by the grand sky. Something like that, overall. Great work bro :)

Great description, was able to imagine the scene very easily!

Are we practicing the dao of word count here? The previous sentences in the first chapter were repeated here. No biggie tho xD