Just binged this entire thing, took me 4 days, but its great. Keep going.

Another great ch. Im really looking forward to Troy getting some maybe actor friends his age aswell, maybe some funnier dialogue, especially with Emma Watson who just like Troy is quite mature for their age. Maybe Troy can make some pranks on set of HP. I know Allan Rickman used to prank Radcliff quite often. Just voicing my thoughts Mr. author.😎

Nice, this is a good one piece fic.

Nice, good ch.

Amen brother.

I actually like this fic, its a lot better than your last, more thought out. But I also want some romance soon, but not with tigress pls…

I know he is going to get the role, as far as I know Radcliffs parents didn’t even want him to become an actor. So with that dilemma, Troy would be a safer choice, aswell with the success of The Sixth Sense, then an obvious choice. But I like that you don’t just make it like it would be an easy victory for Troy, keep the suspense. Keep going, thx for the ch.😎

Love it, great chapter as always, take your time with the chapters as I think this story has great quality and potential. Idk what your ideas involved romance in the future is but Emma Watson seems like an obvious choice for a fling/relationship before he really gets into Hollywood. Maybe you have other ideas, but with him being smart and handsome I could see Emma gaining a crush though out their time filming together. Idk if you want to do the Rupert Grint as Ron, as you may have potential to make another actor as a more permanent friend aswell as an actor friend into the future of his career. Just my thoughts. Thx for the ch.😎

The only critique I have is that the chapters aren’t long enough to satisfy my selfish desires. Great chapter man!

That isn’t a prank, this didn’t hit home with me. Plus he just seems like a spoiled brat throwing a tantrum after getting embarrassed. I understand the thought behind it, young, immature, acting before thinking. But it could have been done a lot of different ways without making the mc look unprofessional and entitled. I still like the story, but I think this chapter could have been done differently. We want to like the mc, and this wasn’t very likable or professional.

Nah, its definitely for shadowing for the future.

Man this is so much better than I expected. Great work man.

How does this make sense? We want the story to be about the mc not Peter Parker? Do something man.

Just like the real woman, she is a gold digger.

I removed my mean comment, i shouldn’t have been that harsh, but I still stand on what I say. The author should listen more to the actual good critique and criticism in the comments.

How? The dude hasn’t made one himself yet? But he is acting very high and mighty for someone who has done nothing? How does this story makes sense?

If he is a private person then he should have chosen another job.

The grammar is abysmal…

The director guild also doesn’t allow anonymity. Even if he use a pen name hiding the face wouldn’t be allowed… it’s just such a retard curve ball to use. Stupid.

I think it could still work, he just have to start with the mission. You know the first movie is basically about his retirement. And the next 3 would be about his return. But I agree with you, would be hard to pull off.