Well, nothing new, a system that moves the protagonist like an obedient dog, absurd rewards, non-existent romance, the author included many women and cannot control them all.

Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.

Well the romance begins after 400 chapters (no joke) after 150 chapters the protagonist will become more gloomy, the author incorporates several concepts that do not add up

These are my personal tastes, don't worry, your story has a good basis, keep it up.

The general idea is good but the entire development is horrible, when you finish it you have to do a restructuring. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I hate the story that is so far from the original. but there is no system, there is no slave to the system, finally someone uses the powerful races of one piece and a single fruit that's 5 stars

This is a translation, it doesn't matter if I mention all the problems and solutions, the story will be left with all the garbage it already has.

It's for the review, no one is interested in reading about an extra character

So look for another story to translate, the Chinese make hundreds of fanfics and from time to time they release a new one among so much garbage.

There are many topics that the anime does not touch on because it is shonen, also the interactions of the protagonist with the main cast and the change of characters from class to b, also helping the villains since the only thing that moves them are their traumas. , a little therapy and that's it, they are healthy

Ok, calling it plagiarism was a lot, but the plot of your talentless son has already been used several times and is no different from other stories.

I don't know if you are copying this story from others with the same plot, but at least have the disappointment of not copying the same mistakes.

I will never understand the pleasure of being killed by a god. I know we are not the most sociable, but we do have a little self-love. The protagonist is pitiful, he is a demigod but he does nothing relevant, a waste of time.

Chinese history. This is the first time I've seen the embarrassing and pitiful protagonist in a Chinese fanfic. That is new. He is usually the slave protagonist of the system.

The note is mainly for the construction of the world, which is not bad, and for the protagonist's motivation for justice. On this page there is only anti-hero and villain mentality

The main theme is comedy, the protagonist is extremely useless in social skills and only seeks to look normal, read the first chapter, which defines the plot completely.

Well the note is out of kindness, the truth is I don't recommend this fanfic. That said, the system is nonsense and the protagonist's personality is not very charismatic, which makes him very flat. The classic justice motivation only works if the protagonist is charismatic or has a strong personality (since the emo hero is in fashion)

A one piece story where the protagonist is not a slave to some system, he is not the monkey of a god or an emo avenger, friend, you earned those 5 stars.

For the intro I hope it is the story that does not have the typical MC with a system that orders him like a dog or the shameful MC who thinks with his crotch, unfortunately it is the shameful MC who thinks with his head down, a waste. of time

No mames, this story is clear, it is full of nonsense. I know teenagers are full of hormones but brother try to control yourself a little. . Bb.