AnonFrost
Countless story' i've seen and forgot, some of them gone temporary while many lost for eternally..New Fanfic would arise replacing the old, yet where are those who give and share this memories..
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AnonFrost5dReplied to Fallenknight7Ch 5 Chapter 5: Life at cube- AnonFrost6dCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Life at cube
- AnonFrost7dCommentedCh 1 Banging my sister (R-18)
- AnonFrost8dReplied to Dont_have_name
i feel u bro, because i myself was the same. I'm still feeling guility for abandoning those reader out there that might be waiting my ff or disappointed already. Sadly, i know i can never go back and make another one again. though, now i have little time and i can at least read and give my opinion to other author as to make sure they didn't fall and lost like others had sometimes..
Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Prologue - AnonFrost9dReplied to AnonFrostCh 1 Chapter 1: The Prologue
- AnonFrost9dCommented
First and foremost, i've seen many author trying to make "The Novel Extra" ff and almost all of them dropped, missing, gone, and lost even though many of them have descent and actually good plot/story. There's 2 ff that still ongoing and even that is taking too long for update (last update was like 1 or 2 month ago? Idk) So here's the thing, are sure you wanna go down this path? Or you're just making this ff because bored? Just want to make sure to not hoping to much on this.
Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Prologue - AnonFrost9dReplied to AnonFrost
Okay, i think i get the gist of it (?). The MC is indeed a father of a single daughter in this ff. Yada yada yada, the daughter wake up from her dream(past) and it seems she's now a maid? (Or something?) And she's also grown up now. Just my opinion, the grammar needs revision, just some word and the Use of dot symbols and such. Beside that, everything seems good. It's still first chapter so, keep up the good work author😤😤📣
Ch 1 Chapter 01. I woke up to violence. - AnonFrost10dReplied to shiro_2
A literall whole fanfic chapter summarized in one comment. You've got some talent i see
This book has been deleted. - AnonFrost11dCommented
Imma be honest, It's too forced.. like, the dialogue and their reaction. why Would Lala suddenly talk about her family matter to someone she never&didn't even know before? It's as if, "oh wow! a bartender! surely nothing bad would happen if i blaber my private matter about my entire family and my races!" like that. even in the Cannon, altough she has lot of loose screw (innocent and almost idiot in my opinion) but she still wary with other.
Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Reincarnated as a Bartender - AnonFrost11dCommented
huh.. a different kind of aproach. not what I'm expected
"Hi, dear customer, please sit down here." Ryuuga greeted her back with a smile and pointed at the seat in front of the bar. - AnonFrost11dCommented
huh? didn't expect someone put manhwa elements into anime again..
Suddenly, a cheerful, girlish voice echoed inside his head. Ryuuga knew it belonged to the System Spirit he named Iselle, inspired by the "Pick Me Up" novel. - AnonFrost18dCommentedCh 7 Poll
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you guys... i don't even need to ask why you guys vote this world..
High School DxD - AnonFrost18dReplied to AnonFrost
no wait, he dan actually blush!!??
"No need to thank me im just doing the right thing." Madara whose has bit of a blush on his face when he saw they are bowing they're heads at him. "Actually there is something i can use your help with. A favor if that's okay." Alise who has a smile on her face then asked "What is it if there is anything we can help you with we'll be glad to do it." members of the Astraea familia who heard they're captain also smiled at nodded they're head. "Then...." - AnonFrost18dCommented
Madara is blushing !??
"No need to thank me im just doing the right thing." Madara whose has bit of a blush on his face when he saw they are bowing they're heads at him. "Actually there is something i can use your help with. A favor if that's okay." Alise who has a smile on her face then asked "What is it if there is anything we can help you with we'll be glad to do it." members of the Astraea familia who heard they're captain also smiled at nodded they're head. "Then...." - AnonFrost18dReplied to Failure_Number9
couldn't have agreed more
'Alright then my first wish is to be reincarnated as Uchiha Madara and have his skills in the 4th great ninja war.' I stated my first wish. - AnonFrost18dReplied to Mitsurei_Raizen
it seems so
Using the Gunbai i blocked the attack of the Juggernaut and i added chark on the Gunbai and used "Uchiha Reflection" after using it a strong force blasted the Juggernaut and sending it flying. The Astraea Familia was shocked to see the Juggernaut was sent flying and looked at the man that saved Lyra.