Naonoe

My brain hurts aswell.. I ride, it felt painful reading of someone who probably has only dreamt of riding a real motorcycle.. Also, no clue about metals and how they work :I Cold molding metal with pure force will destroy any structural integrity of almost any metal :I and using heat vision will destroy any heat treatment of the metal :I

If you have 2k words a day, that is fine for a chapter length. instead of making shorter chapters and releasing twice a day, maybe make one longer with the combined amount to make it a more cohesive story? Great story :)

Uhm, this is not how bullets work.. But story is good anyways.

Welcome back, friend

Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26. Writing quality becomes trash after chapter 26.

Is no one but me laughing their butts of about all the adverbs overused in this chapter?

He already is super rich :I

To avoid people saying its AI, you, the author can run what you write through an AI checker. Nowadays there is so much AI that writing styles unknowingly get inspired by other people using AI so that there will be misconceptions that something written by hand is AI. Instead saying its using AI grammar and phrases when checked even when writing by hand

Continuity error or hmmm, lets say that not all of the uzumaki clan intermarries and they become wives or husbands of people from other places :P Make headcannon for stuff that makes little sense

Actually they are very realistic. Considering what happened to peter's parents.. Yeah