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ngl, that looks cool

Don't worry I'm fine with them pointing out mistakes. Now, for this FF I'm taking the Japanese nomenclature and not the dubbing, this because in each dub the names of some Digimon/attacks differ quite a lot or are called exactly the same as other Digimon/attacks. As I didn't want to confuse the reader in the long run I preferred to do it this way even if it causes some confusion at the beginning.

Mimi is definitely a character. I hope I haven't made her “mature” yet, but I can see why that would be. Mimi is a bit odd in that (In my opinion) she possesses a few qualities of all the Chosen but never without ceasing to be herself, she's kind of a wild card in that sense. In fact I think that next to TK, she's currently the character I have the most difficulty writing. I just hope I don't make her too OOC before her development arc. Oh, I can assure you that Tai's 'test of courage' will be... a test of courage :p Along with a big info dump.

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I plan to continue although right now I am juggling with time, I may have to cut the length of the chapters from 1.5K/2K to 1.2K/1.5K words in order to publish at least one chapter a week.

I may do an interlude on them later, after all those two will eventually be very important. Right now I'm debating whether I should include in a chapter the development of Tai or not, as I don't want readers to get the feeling that I'm just following the canon with some slight changes :p

Yup, Matt explains a bit about how that fight went in Chapter 18.

Oh I forgot, about Talon and their conveniences, I'll be honest and say I didn't have anything planned for them beyond just being the bad guys, but then I thought about Kairos, the interesting story of Reaper and Moira, and the damn incompetence of the League of Villains to be, well, villains, I thought about all this and in the end I decided to make them a big problem instead of a problem that pops up every once in a while.

Tru x2