a good concept story but just one thing killed it for me and that's bad grammar at points in the story that were really irritating for me .like I don't comment on grammar because mine is also not that good but it helps pull the story at it's worse points and accentuates some best points .so yeah if anyone wants my opinion then I will say give it a try for a few chapters and if it's not to your liking then leave it . Bye bye fellow review readers.

This is the greatest novel I have read till now along with maybe one or two more .Sadly I don't have money to spend on it because I am still a student but this novel has gone in my list of novels that have made me hooked to the story with an intensity like no other and I have written it down so that one day I can support all these authors that have written such beautiful art of a story .I can't imagine how much the author had thought about his story while writing it down with how much he is always sick . You have my heartfelt gratitude for providing this amazing artwork and I can't do much besides giving your book a review and writing words of gratitude that doesn't give you anything tangible and i know that these words do nothing to better your situation but believe me if i had anything myself then i would have supported you as much as I could and I don't even have a lot of time to read on webnovel and mostly i open this app to browse for amazing books. Anyway i am going on a tangent here so if any person is reading this review then know that this is the book that you will regret not having read it sooner so go and read and support it if you are a rich guy who has more money than he can spend and even those that are well off should spend on this book, you will have no regrets believe me . And author of you are reading this then get better soon and finish ten more books like this at least .😁😆🎉❤️.

it's a good story but eventually it waned my interest in it because the author created a lot of chaos in the story but it left many plotholes as the story progressed and it's too slowpaced as well as I don't just understand logic of mc it seems he makes decisions with the flow like there is not code he sticks with and does whatever he likes even if it is something opposite of what he had done before .I can keep ranting of the problems this story has and it will never end but all said and done author has build a truly unique story with lot ingenious plotdevices to keep the reader's attention and overall well written but it just won't be in the top books I have read up to date but you can give it a try it's just story has too many problems for my taste that my interest completely waned after about 200 chapters .

it is good but it's slow paced with a lot of exciting stuff happening in between but I am sorta fan of novels that keep my blood pumping from all the mystery ,power ups and battle and plot and creative mc so it's not my taste to read a little slice of life fantasy feeling that this novel gives . overall though it's good and I would recommend if you have a lot of time on your hands and patience to enjoy a slowpace slice of life novel like this one.Hope its helpfull for the new readers. Plus point of this novel is that the sentences flow with some rythem as you read them and it rarely breaks so good writing from author , for this you have to give him credit.

when I started reading this novel it was good but after 30 something chapters I have come to dislike a little bit our mc who for some goddamn reason feels he is responsible for misfortune of everyone around him even though it's clearly not and bro even if you had such good heart then why not go live like a hermit like his master suggested but no there is danger and I will step into it and still expect that my close associates will not be harmed at all ,like his naive thinking has me baffled and even after that when clearly the girl he had been traveling with had brought danger because of herself onto both of them and after nearly saving both their asses by risking his own life and plot armour and still is like because of me her hands got burned like bruh I would atleast be incenced if nothing else but still okay he is good guy ,what do i know what one would feel but in any case anyone who does not feel negative towards the person that has brought death upon you then he is just mental but even after all that he still has time to think about how to benefit her more like bruh your own ass is chased like a monkey and you are doing this like if author told me his personality is influenced by some trait power that other novels have i would believe him immediately because he becomes lost in the moment very easily and forgets about everything and his mind becomes blank slate that somebody can immediately fill and manipulate him and I won't be reading more to find if any character development has been made or not after this because ,simply, it's not worth it when the author himself stopped writing the novel and is last updated three years ago. To fellow readers I would suggest you read something else that will have a chance for complete story.

man I binged watched it when it came as free read novel on the page till it was locked and man the curiosity for more ate my mind the whole night and i couldn't even sleep .Now i am waiting to read daily .

oh I want more chapters so badly . it's torturing me everyday .There isn't any other decent novel left in this webnovel for me to read.

This novel was good but i am dropping it .The reasons for it are -:The mc is too good and seriously I think has gone senile due to old age ,like he just doesn't understand it that he will get killed and that others will kill him , honestly he should be dead right now many times and i haven't even read till a paywall of the novel comes ,he is alive only due to plot armour and I don't think character development will happen so I am leaving.

okay i read it but it was just so so.i was interesting while it lasted . its's a wasted potential novel.

bro it's he who doesn't know but they surely know based on how even a store manager knows it ,they probably trained hard without potion in the start but when they figured they don't have necessary talent then resources are only choice for a fast powerup even if it comes with a cost ,honestly instead of posting these comments why don't you just enjoy a story without too much reading in between the line and go with the flow the writer intends you to ,you can always justify these technical plot holes with something else for your convenience .If it was character development or major plot hole or mc does something that is out of a character it was set out to be and you don't like then you free to read other books because if you can't like a character then you will always find problems in plot .I am saying this with experience so take it as a advice and don't get offended

ok what the fuck , it's just a Pokemon in novel version accept few thing that take it apart from there but those are even worse of than Pokemon idea .like i stopped reading it when he says about tournament bcz that's just Pokemon c'mon i wanted to see something new but it's a ripoff so I stopped after that .The only reason i have given 4.2 rating bcz obviously I haven't read enough to judge a novel of this size. The only thing that got your ratings off is writing quality . It's really bad , can't read more even if i have tiny bit curiosity left . it's not that bad bcz I have read worse but it's Still no good if you want a readers attention and don't have something in your novel that they will like and if writing is also bad then can't say you will have a lot of luck gathering readers for any unique idea that you have made and make them want to see how it progresses . ok enough ranting here bye ...............(author plz take the advice and fix this you will have more readers).

only one word to describe it ,it is the best I am going to die because there are no more chapters to read I am all caught up .I can't even sleep peacefully and only thinking what happens further in the story .hey author post 50 chapters a day atleast , don't force me to kidnap you and then forcing you to write in a bunker somewhere.

pretty decent at the start but like it's not my piece of pie .Seth was a man who didn't care about anyone even his family in his previous life having even experimented on them but it is now becoming something I can't just stomach he has been brainwashed with all this family drama of his new life . If you like it you can stomach it but it's gotten out of hand story doesn't seem controlled like it was before.

it's some of the most bullshit story I have read .I skimmed through 180 chapters in a span of a day ,at first I was reading but then after I hit 100 chapters my read speed was literally 5x as I scimmed the rest and I am telling the mc is some generic character that isn't as he is displayed in his previous life .I thought when he died he got his memory only but his stats being like he has all the muscle memory in his body after he got back in his previous body of a 12 year old what kind of logic is that and how he is shown a full year clowning middle school bcz of his bs stats and previous life experience and how he is gloating after that , like I would be ashamed to do even a little of that like he is fooling himself being a defender when he is clearly not bcz of his build and now bcz he is able to defend some 12 year old player who have just picked the game becz of his 20 years of playing basket in his previous life he is himself to be hotshit . Only thread of hope for his future career is the system but he doesn't even acknowledge it's importance in his life like' he was a little disappointed after gaining this badge 'but the next one made him smile like the fuck you been talking like that he gratefull that system been giving you those badges when you are out there goofing your ass out (like system gives him benefit to recover like in one night from any kind of fatigue but this guy does what 3 hours at most practice after and before school and barely 1 hour more and that is also taken up most of the days by his hanging out making bullshit emotional memories like I ain't hag out as much with my friends as he does when I was in middle school and I will have you know I was a very social guy with a lot of friends but his is on another level . what's he doing I ain't got a idea , like bro knows how his last life played out with his physical tools but he be doing same mistake by not even looking at the system throughout the season he actually remembers it when he comes to a realization that he ain't shit even in middle school and activates all kind ability of the system to win, that shit was mad funny and when I thought that once he gets his lesson he will make his all the bad habits change but what I saw left me speechless of you read then you know what I am talking about as he didn't even practice in all his break in winter even after recovering from injuries and taking more grace period in the name of healing to make some memories with his friends and family like this whole thing is just bullshit story, if he didn't get invite of Nike he would be sitting in his bum ass doing nothing and reading manga , I simply have had enough .......Only one sports novel didn't disappoint me , in all of its chapters I would be immersed ,not a single wasted line that I didn't read in each chapters and that was 'The greatest of all time '.

review is only after readings 14 chapters . You can read it it's like humanity justice warrior story so you can read it if you like these Ideal plots . Like first of all he is like yeah they are 'my family'(like bro you didn't even know them before 2 days) and what if they get called to raid a SS tier dungeon for humanity so no I will use this system which basically gives me shortcut to power and become a savior of humanity in their stead , like his child like mentality is really pissed me off for good so yeah I am not reading it .like his parents are c grade like hell they are getting called for it ,we don't even know if he had parents before transmigration and if he does then he forgot them like asap and accepts new people as his parent in just a day and is even thinking of becoming their hero of justice ,knight in shining Armor and save them from unknown threat of ss grade dungeon and he knows his parents and his genius sister are only people in the world that will have to save humanity who are mere c grade people like what kind of manchild thinking is this .I know where this novel is going so I am leaving .

Author here writing my own review so ,I will clear few things before you start reading the story, chapters will come like monthly, I will start writing once I have more time but that ain't happening for the next 1 or two years so you can add the story in your library if it interests you that's all.will I finish this novel?yeah definitely someday do I have the full story ?nah ! I don't have a full story just some arcs have been planned and some key world building plot is planned and I have some ideas about ending but it will be a long time before that happens (atleast 2000 chaps). it definitely will be exciting once I can manage to get free time in my work shedule.

I have read 50 chapters untill the part where I have to unlock new chapters and I am not happy. I was entreaked by story read it with 'patience' (I have emphasized patience bcz I don't have a lot of it) I also have very short attention span like I get bored quickly but author did a great job at synopsis and his tags I read it and many times slept in reading the chapter in between I am bored out of my mind after reading it till now and honestly feels like I wasted my time like story progresses at a snails pace mc is like recovering for who knows how long and I cannot explain it in words but the tag overpowered will come into effect after 1000 chapters the way it's progressing.I have dropped it's just too slow ,even if author said it will be slow but there is nothing really going it is just slow for sake of being slow you know what I mean.

I have read around 350 chapters .I was quite satisfied with the start and liked the development and system but everything went a little off when author decided to change the personality of Gustav with help of angy it was a little cringey for me at the start but it's not like I hated it I read more and more chapters and didn't mind author downplaying mc's speed I thought well maybe she deserves it but I couldn't wrap my head around these powerups given to her even more than anything else but I was patient wanted to continue ignoring whatever cringe was coming to mind but when author introduced how he could pass the bloodlines then I decided to drop it I already knew where this was going and I didn't like it one bit I read these novels because MC has something special in him that differentiates from the rest even if author had decided to help his teammates and specially his lover angy he could have done by making Gustav spent credits to aquire something that could improve their bloodline in the shop in bloodline item section but this is just rediculous all the time I spent reading and enjoying the novel came crashing down on me .I am left quite disappointed with the author when I honestly thought it would be one of the masterpieces that I have read till now especially with the no grammer mistake and writing skills of author but hey maybe it's just me that I don't like what author did and majority will disagree but this is my conclusion. p.s.-i read all the chapters till around 350 in a matter of 4 days it was very addictive especially with the writing skills of author so you can try understanding the disappointment I am feeling already never have I given a review for my opinion in novels but I took time to write this essay because of my hopes for the novel that were crushed . I don't know if author will ever see this or read this but hey atleast I threw Everything I wanted to say in the essay.