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Please just dump her
Smh Haley just starting to seem like a brat tbh I really hope they don’t get back together
Very unkind no matter how you put it
I forgot the name now jen something she stayed in his house by hiding from him then proceede to look around and when he was asleep knocked out after a long day she decides to take advantage
Yh Haley really isn’t a likeable character in these modern family fics I read another fic where she was female lead as well and she was just as annoying in this one in fact maybe even more annoying than this one
Yh well done author your slightly ruining it now a man who was your friend who didn’t listen to the rumours about you and trusted you and this is what he gets if this continues man the Blackwood should have killed him
No offence author but I get he’s ambitious and even if he does get a dragon one day these constant thoughts and slightly reptitive emotions just kinda portray him as utterly foolish
Facts every sentence he says is just repeated whining tbh
Is this gonna be a common occurrence till he gets angry and jealous until he does something stupid for the plot ? Just want a heads up
Generally started of well then just got worst and worst with every girl he meets randomly falling for him he bends over backwards for literally everyone at some point it stopped from him being nice to just sad. He literally got sexuall assaulted stalked and is still friends with girl jusy because she’s a girl Main character has absolutely no backbone or respect for himself I recommend don’t read the novel because though it might start good you’ll just be extremely frustrated at how it turns out