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Jwunder_99

Jwunder_99

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  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_9918d ago
    Replied to Tanz3107

    The reason the guy said you need to pump those numbers is because in your original post you said "I have been reading on WN for 4 years and have read about 40 novels"... which means that you were reading about 10 novels a year which is rookie numbers according to the guy in the post.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_99a month ago
    Replied to Younes_Serfag

    In this case serve and protect refers to the police in modern times. He should have been more clear tho.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_995 months ago
    Posted

    I have decided to give an early review after finishing the free chapters and continue reading. I was told by a friend that the beginning is hard to read through but its worth it . later on the story gets better. Which is honestly the only reason I'm still pushing through, otherwise this would be my 4th ever dropped book. Early on the writing is garbage. The character development definitely garbage. Like the MCs personality seems to change every 10 chapters. He blames himself for every little thing that happens, but the one time he should at least partially blame himself and the other person/Shirley should have no blame. He throws all the blame on her. Not only does the MC act like an 11 year old and everyone around him says he's so mature, but the writing made me think that an 11 yr old probably wrote it. He says he's an adult trapped in a young body, but never acts like it. He's dumb, plain and simple. His arrogance never changes, he's like I can't be arrogant in this life or I won't know how I died, proceeds to be arrogant. Even after Evelyn has her hand cut off, he says I should learn from this, I got too conceited and didn't bring any guards. Next chapter, nobody would ever touch me because my master. I'm practically a God to them. I guess the childish arrogance makes sense though coming from the author. I mean half his comments in the review and comment section are the same. Im honestly surprised that people continued to read the book when he was in the comment section telling people I don't need you to read and if you don't like the book you don't have to tell us, delete your comment and leave. This dude obviously can't take constructive criticism. There was a really nice 3 star review that I felt was not only fair but the explanation for why was really thought out and greatly worded. The author left a comment about how he was laughing at that guy and his review, I guess because it wasn't a 5 star review. Again, my friend who likes the book even said that the beginning was terrible, which leads me to believe that a good portion of his long term readers probably didn't like the beginning as well. So I don't understand what gives this author the confidence and arrogance he has to believe that his story deserves 5 stars across the board and that it has no flaws or something. But judging by how he reacts to non 5 star reviews, I wouldn't be surprised if he comes at me next for this review. Truthfully, the story being bad at this point doesn't even make me want to drop this as much as the author acting like an arrogant young master from one of these Chinese novels and thinking he's hot sh*t and you should agree with him and give him 5 stars and maybe even bow down before him as you do so. I hope they author has matured as the book has. Bc the only thing I can say about all the arrogant comments and replies to reviews were that most of them were from 5 years ago around when the book was beginning.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_995 months ago
    Replied to Enlightened_Idiot

    Well let me enlighten the Idiot in you... bc in the town I grew up in, we had plenty of people get pregnant under 16. Including kids as young as 8. I know, trashy town. Anyways, for the kids who got pregnant between 8-12 there was a survey that showed a 100% rate of their parents not telling them about anything sexual, entirely avoiding those conversations and the kids ended up getting taken advantage of due to lack of knowledge. And the survey also showed that the kids from 13-16 who got pregnant there was a 60% rate that their parents didn't tell them anything about sex. The other 40% were the curious ones as you said who just wanted to have sex young and didn't use proper protection. So statistically actually not telling your kids about sex is more likely to be the cause of them getting pregnant. Especially if they go to a public school. They are going to hear about these things at school and if you don't talk to them about it, then they will figure things out for themselves.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_996 months ago
    Commented

    I feel like maybe yall are overlooking something here, Lilith told him James wouldn't be home until Friday. Then he was supposed to come home at 3am, but his business trip was extended to make him not be home until Friday. This could mean Lilith knew what was going to happen in the future or set it up to make sure he didn't return until Friday. It doesn't necessarily mean a problem with the story...

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_996 months ago
    Replied to Moanarch

    If I were you, I wouldn't listen to the other guy. As someone who apparently prides himself of History, he's still wrong. Plus I would also like to know what Rome from like 5k years ago had to do with a prehistoric primitive era. Plus if he really wants to argue, he can look at Native American Indians as we have records of that and they were pretty much still primitive even 500 years ago. As for the Rome topic, he's partially right that as slaves had no rights they were the main ones used. But Roman's also had orgies and usually presented their woman to a higher up noble if it could gain favors or even promotions. They might even offer their daughters or whatever. So although Virginity might be semi important to get married although still wasn't that important because they just wanted the hottest wives to go around and show off. Usually after their virginity was taken and sometimes they may wait until birthing a successor. Then that woman was practically free reign for others to gain as many favors as possible.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_998 months ago
    Replied to TEMP_9_tempacc

    IKEA is a store, probably where he got his furniture. Its pretty famous actually with stores across 60 countries.

  • Jwunder_99
    Jwunder_99a year ago
    Replied to NecroBin

    Will the MC ever add more girls to the harem, or is he just sticking with the original 3?