TossAndTurn

Chapters gets shorter and shorter. With a lot of random explanations added in the chapter. The chapters are being written like this now. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxx! Xxxxxxxxx. Short sentences one after another. You could read a dialogue between two irrelevant characters and the whole chapter is almost gone. Example like. A powerful figure, frowns, glances up, then at Michael, *thinks*, *sighs*, etc. And 60% of the chapter is gone.

?? Didn’t even use his ability.

It’s pretty easy to see, and look at the reviews. One time it said sum about written by chatGPT in of the the later chapters.

Why isn’t there a tag of kingdom building? Heard a lot of reviews and comments here and there that, in the later part of the stories, it’s heavily focused on kingdom building.

I’ll drop this novel. Never seen a main character so dumb. Filled with arrogant characters left and right. Just say the equipment is soul bound. No need to mess with a irl assassin organisation

Nerf after nerf? Arrogant characters?and 3k chapters of this? The reviews being to just drop this novel might be true😭

Can you spoil a little?

Despite being labeled as a video game element novel, there are basically no game mechanics present. Skills don’t have descriptions, XP and loot from monsters are never mentioned, and fights (when they do happen) are glossed over so quickly they might as well not exist. On top of that, the pacing is painfully slow. The MC is still level 2 at chapter 100. Entire arcs are spent on mundane real-world stuff — like buying a house — dragging on for 9+ chapters with little to no relevance to the supposed main plot.

Why so many chapters just to buy a house, a phone and a smart match🧍‍♂️. There hasn’t been a lot of video game elements in the story either. No description of skills, attributes, lvl up points etc.

Should have added a editer to the novel, sometimes I get stuck midways reading because it lacks the correct grammar. Should have added more..”advanced” English words.