Lunalea

I don't really know much about it, but regardless, it's sci-fi so it doesn't have to adhere to realism If the world was flooded, then nuclear reactors would be affected too so all the radiation would go into the water. or something

I think you should read it again why? because it's much better now.

You need to work on the character design, but nevertheless it has improved significantly and it's interesting. I'm looking forward to chapter 4

nice And i need more......................

ahh. Not enough dialogue to engage the reader. Disappointing.