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The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!
I like the ideas but there is way, way too much time spent pontificating and expounding on them. Great story line, I like the gender bending, I like the direction the plot appears to be heading but I got bored with the detailed philosophy that felt like I was reading someone’s journal of personal revelations.