Great improvement from previous chapters, story is now more understandable. I rarely read horror fiction like this but was able to go through 6 chapters without screaming. 👏👏👏👏👏 Best of luck bro

Woooooooooow I need something with a mystery thriller vibe like this, Writer does a good job in keeping the grammar neat, description ls clear and the pace of the story encourages us to read more chapters All the best man, I rate this book 10/10 It's like I am going to watch "Ancient detective" again though on another level

This is more lively and fresh even when story sounds familiar. I had say give it a try for twenty minutes before you quit it. Was more like watching a real movie Infront of men

An Epic fantasy Adventure mystery, name it all, with a side flick of reincarnation. This is too good to read, you need 6-9 chapters before you can decide either to quit or not. Totally worth it.

Grammar and punctuation should be improved, give spacing to some sentences so we can understand who has said what story is good. Characters are intriguing The romance may be cliche but twisted. Bes of luck

The start is nice, the FL comes to herself and honestly her fiancee should not be blamed for calling it off (sorry if I didn't get it right) But then Xander needs to stay in the past like around the boys quarters.

Chapter 7 brought me back here. This is a pure fantasy romance worth it. Woooo just give regular updates please and your book "Melting the ice legends"??? What's up? Can't find it

I love the story. So much improvement my dear, I want to understand what happened after he entered her father's room. It is obvious that he remembered her but was held by something.