Med_Nerd

Umm... Ok. I totally understand everything you said

Very weird sentence structure and too much jumping from one topic to another in a same paragraph. Sometimes it is really hard to follow what's going on and picturing the scenarios.

Explode Quirrell's turban, that should do the trick.

If you have time pls work on ROB characterization. He gives me car sellsman vibe trying so hard to sell reincarnation idea to MC.

Konoha is the best possible place to reincarnate unless you are an Uchiha. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

If author's previous stories any indication then this is going to be enjoyable............................. .......................................................................................... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]....................................................................................................... ...............

Hope you continue writing this story....,.............................................................................................................................

First 5 chapters were good. MC in a new world, faces hardships to keep freedom, then suddenly author starts to force the plot for the cost of MC iq, decision making, agency. A solid meh 😕