First time read Novel Video games and it's soooo good, all are added well, even the character design and the story development. Ganbatte author!!!

The story is very interesting, even the story development, writing quality and character design were added well. look forward the next chaps

I love how the story goes, but can you please add more character design as well with Sounds Effect, it will be perfect 4,5 for me. and add more dialogue. Good luck dear Author! !!

hello, I love this bro story goes. well is everything, I love Adam character. everything's clear and beautiful. keep your work author! you worth it! Ganbatte

Love the story, all is clear with the story development, and even character's designs were added.

I love the way the story goes very interesting and don't forget to add character design. Perfect to me

I love this story, and how you improve in the dialogue, it will be 4,5 for me if you add character design and some sound effect

here review from me, I like how the story flow and everything is good enough but there's no dialog and it's all just explanatio, no character design. it will be 4,5 for me if you had of those

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