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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1d
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    My condolences

    Ch 20 NEWS UPDATE*
    Fate/Dark Knight
    Anime & Comics · FateAuthor
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv2d
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    It's good that he couldn't stand it and killed and cursed them

    Ch 17 Chapter 16: betrayal
    Avatar, the spirit of knowledge
    Anime & Comics · Kalachri
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv14d
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    justice from the Helltaker game

    Ch 6 Rubber duck
    Fate/Hazbin: Charlemagne of Hazbin Hotel
    Anime & Comics · Tahmina_Begum_9138
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv15d
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    Cerberus from the game Helltaker

    Ch 5 Hello Zestial
    Fate/Hazbin: Charlemagne of Hazbin Hotel
    Anime & Comics · Tahmina_Begum_9138
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv24d
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    Я думаю, либо перегрузку клеток, либо высокую бодрость, ведь криптонцы поглощают солнце для зарядки себя.

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    DaoistTA2TIv1mth
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    С днём рождения!!!! Желаю тебе счастья и здоровья

    Ch 69 Chapter- 66 Reward
    Danmachi: The Blind Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1mth
    Replied to Aether112

    Было бы хорошо если бы он знал

    Ch 128 Chapter 127
    The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1mth
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    А какой следующий мир?

    Ch 3 Judgement's Day
    The Eldritch Great One's Multiversal Playground
    Video Games · RealityEldritch101
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1mth
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    Мне очень интересна реакция других переселенцев на его имя

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - The Storm Dragon/Goblins & Direwolves
    Just a Blacksmith in Tensura
    Anime & Comics · AyanoChibi
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    DaoistTA2TIv2mth
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    +1

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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv2mth
    Replied to average_ff_enjoyr

    А можно на звание?

    Ch 38 To be strong and weak
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv2mth
    Replied to average_ff_enjoyr

    А от куда она?

    Ch 38 To be strong and weak
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv2mth
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    Please let it be Hestia

    Ch 68 Chapter 68
    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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    DaoistTA2TIv3mth
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    I pray that Alaya and Gaia will help your wife.

    Ch 35 35. Abomination
    Fate/Juggernaut
    Anime & Comics · greenbaypitbull
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    DaoistTA2TIv3mth
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    It would be fun if the captains found out the abilities of his sword at this meeting.

    Ch 34 Recommended  
    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
    Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv4mth
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    Hello, the author liked the idea, but there are flaws in the letter if you fix them, it will be easier for people to read. For example, make more digressions, otherwise it's hard to read large paragraphs.Also, make more descriptions (of water) in the text and even when other characters think, write p-s on his behalf or attribute who said or thought it, otherwise it is not clear whose thoughts and speech it is. In general, when other characters speak or think, or the authors usually write from them in a different paragraph, so it's easier to understand who is talking or when the last one finished speaking. But you probably already know this, because when you read others, you can see how the author wrote and what tricks he used and gain experience due to this. Good luck starting your writing career[img=recommend]. (Google Translator)

    Ch 1 1 Orleans : summoning
    Fate/The sun warrior
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    DaoistTA2TIv4mth
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    Siduri

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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv5mth
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    Удачи

    Ch 8 Maybe no chap tmrrw.
    In MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)
    Anime & Comics · Daoist764038
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1yr
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    А кто такой Леватин я не помню? Автор главы класс, очень интересно всегда читать. А будет прода по Дарк соулсу или ты хочешь этот закончить с начало?

    Ch 62 Finishing Up Plans.
    The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
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  • DaoistTA2TIv
    DaoistTA2TIv1yr
    Commented

    Автор не бросай

    Ch 47 Origin Sword
    Fate in Denial (Fateverse)
    Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
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