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A truly difficult read, lots of ML abusing, forcing, and r*ping the pathetic and no backboned FL. The author is all sorts of wrong for indulging and writing this. Many misunderstandings and a typical hypocritical manipulative male.

Before he denied being in a relationship, why would she still go for a taken guy ... past life aside and all, I don't get it. And why would she come to his house to sleep over? Overly dressed with red lips just for a home dinner? The beginning is a bit cringe and disorienting.

How old is she? I always want to know when I start reading these kinds of books. Is it a phedophilic/grooming relationship where the young girl is always under 18 and underdeveloped while the man is in his 20s. Some Authors constantly have an itch to make their books involve disgusting relationships especially with transmigration and all, morals and ethicality out the window!

It was really good at first but later she still pathetically fell for his useless apology and minimal change and quickly slept with him. Still trie’s to care for him even though he’s using her and is still attached to his childhood’s friends sister (Gianna). Not worth coins when the outcome leads to the Fl being used by the people she was supposed stay clear of and get revenge on.

This is stupid take when grooming and pedophelia are common. Stories like these always love to make the girl a teenager just under 18 and pair them with an adult male. What is so attractive about a full grown man and a still growing teenage girl.

Is she Ml crazy, why can’t she gain superpowers to better her future not get with the ml. Whatever, I’m well aware of how this disappointing character is be for the rest of the story.

The Fl is getting more pathetic with her feelings. She knows the world and wasn’t sheltered from it so why is she described as not knowing why her heart races when she sees the ml. It’s not rocket science, she smart yet couldn’t tell that she’s just attracted to him? Is she gonna be another woman who can’t separate her feelings because there are more important things than feeling in her situation. It’s a little cringe she waiting for him. Is she smart and stupid at the same time too.

Really? ……One stupid way to get yourself kidnapped, hurt or dead. Dumb ways to die~

The story telling isn’t very good, seems to have signs of incest. Fl is pathetic at times and can’t keep a back bone with her family for long or at most go no contact. This drags on and on and on and the Alpha’s that are interested in her are cringe, arrogant and overall annoying. It seems most of the characters and their personalities are just not it.

These chapters are so chaotic and unorganized. I thought the mers were at the hospital why are they now in the village when the FL was coming back from shopping? It’s cringe and somewhat illegible. Disappointing, I’m dropping this.