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I'll explain it to you quickly, in the Google translator, the genders are inverted, at least in English Spanish, since we do not specify a gender, we just say "El" which in English would be "He" But it is also used as "The" so which, The Ancient One translates as The Old! I'm wrong?
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Chapter 2: Finding and Plan!
That's not the problem, I mean it all sounds epically unnecessary, it's like you're preluding something before it happens, it's all very exaggerated, also the third person feel, it's a bit awkward, you should be more lax and relax the atmosphere a bit, believe me, I know from experience, sometimes exaggerating and making something look epic is not good, Example: when I search for information on the internet, "He prepared to search the depths of the internet." those are the exaggerated lines used by AI's like Chatgpt. Whatever, don't listen to me, just be constant and you'll improve, just don't give it up, that's all.