MorkMorkinson
Fairly new to writing things for other people to read. Please be kind! My interests center around fantasy, romance, and occasionally some darker tones. A little despair adds flavor✨
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MorkMorkinson7mthReplied to Laziest_PillowI feel like several of your critiques would have been different had you read a few more chapters. You do make a few good points (like forgetting names) but some of those points (such as the relationship with Gunter) has plot behind it and reason. You’ve articulated pretty well on just about everything with the exception of the character design. What don’t you like exactly? Why do you find the tie in of the politics confusing? Why do you feel the plot is slow?
detailBanished From My Village And Mated To The Cursed Heir And His BrothersFantasy · TheLastRemnants- MorkMorkinson8mthPosted
S’pretty good. Never really been into yaoi but the story and the characters are really engaging. The writer’s know what they’re doing and even the slow moments feel purposeful and not just filling in the gap. 9/10 would recommend.
detailBanished From My Village And Mated To The Cursed Heir And His BrothersFantasy · TheLastRemnants - MorkMorkinson11mthCommentedCh 1 I Want My Refund!
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 53 The Ball
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 53 The Ball
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 44 Always The Outcast
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 20 The Past Never Dies
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 18 My Turn To Hurt
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 12 A King’s Mistake
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 6 A Choice To Make
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 4 Prisoners Of War
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 1 The Eye Of The Prey
- MorkMorkinson1yrCommentedCh 1 The Eye Of The Prey