MorkMorkinson

I feel like several of your critiques would have been different had you read a few more chapters. You do make a few good points (like forgetting names) but some of those points (such as the relationship with Gunter) has plot behind it and reason. You’ve articulated pretty well on just about everything with the exception of the character design. What don’t you like exactly? Why do you find the tie in of the politics confusing? Why do you feel the plot is slow?

S’pretty good. Never really been into yaoi but the story and the characters are really engaging. The writer’s know what they’re doing and even the slow moments feel purposeful and not just filling in the gap. 9/10 would recommend.

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