am a newbie author and its my first novel. I hope you guys call out my mistakes and in return i can improve my writing skills and improve while i am writing this novel if you have any suggestions or events you would like to see in the novel write it down in the comments and i will see it and respond and if you have any questions i will try my best to answer it

great novel and story building character are very well written author pls don’t kill kent 😂😂