Jat_The_King

it's a good novel with great potential but their are many grammatical errors which is not a bother but what ruins the story is use of heavy words like where you can explain in simple words why use three to four sentences or sometimes repeat same thing continually , it is understandable that author is a newbie and trying his best but he should take inspiration from other works and improve his story , author is trying to create a suspense but if you are gonna explain it in next line with a flashback what's the point of not explaining it in previous line ? Main character is young in age but If he awakened his past life memories he should be a little more mature , there are many conversations taking place but nothing makes sense at some point , it's a good story but i am a little dissatisfied with author's writing style ( not grammar ) Hope it gets better and we get more character development as in First 50 chapter there is no development in story nor in character.