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Been writing off and on for about 10 years. Trying to see what I can do with it. https://www.youtube.com/@gcar90 = My YouTube https://www.facebook.com/groups/207455599763830 = Facebook Group
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Carmen_Ella19dCommentedI think the phrase you are looking for at the start of the sentence is "Faye swung an about-face on..." And that's me being nitpicky over word choice. Good flow, good pictures, I want to see more.
Faye swung about to face her step-sister; she watched Alice cover her mouth with her fan to hide her sneer. Like the other Noble women did when they exchanged secrets and whispers about one another during tea parties.