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So any critique is automatically valid ?

If your review had actually some merit then i wouldn’t have asked what you were on. A simple mistake? Him being bad will lead to him being mocked. You know teenagers & stuff. Mostly away from their parents. England. How else do you expect the story to start if he isn’t some lowgrade failure? Ai feel? Ah yes. The usual “this sentence isn’t maxed out on emotions etc so it must be Ai”. Common. That’s not even critique at this point.

Has the heat fried your brain? He can leave 100 reviews for all I care. The problem I have is that there are too many wannabe critics who claim sth is AI & then when you ask them for proof the only thing they have is “Trust me/It’s obvious/You are an idiot if you don’t see it”. If you take every review for pure gold then that’s your problem.

Are you on drugs? Don’t talk about common sense when you lack it completely. MC is being treated badly at the academy - what a shocker when he can’t play good at that time. Mc has not been humiliated once in 420 chap. Vindictive? Not once either. How about you learn what the words mean that you throw around 1st?

& maybe check your phrasing for your little chapter challenge before anything^^ I read the first. Descriptions… wow… so inhuman like to describe without flowery words what happened then. So bad. You are so right. Report it at once. No prices for him 🙀

Family company? Is that supposed to mean sth.? Even if the whole novel is 100% AI, so what? If you “think” that you know just don’t read it. And you want to talk about my IQ… I already showed you what it can be instead of AI. If you can’t take that into consideration then it’s shows your own deficiencies. You are not some literature connoisseur. Pride? What does that have to do with anything lol ? Its always the same with you wannabe critics. Almost Bot like arguments.

Oh & I haven’t read a single chapter. Simply went to the comments to have a look what others say. Baffling for someone like you I know.

I should have bet money on your response. Iam not defending anybody. Iam simply pointing to your inadequate knowledge & cringe behavior. You must have a lot of useless time on your hands to check stuff like this. If you don’t like the novel you move on. Simple concept for most of us. “I use one that’s not available to the public”… are you misusing company property? ;)

Sure you do. Now go look up minimalism, hard boiled & technical writing styles. People like you really can screw a good novel over with your pseudo “Oh yes i recognize Ai & use a 10k a month proof reader because without it I sound as credible as a sack of rice” bs. Bunch of clowns.

No wonder you can’t. Only because a character isn’t surprised/shocked/astonished at every little thing doesnt make him an ai product. There are more than enough books out there with cold mcs who don’t show emotions every 10 sentences. You only think you know. You don’t actually do.