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    overall a nice novel but why change the sex once someone got used to a male protagonist. I had to make a female character right away........

    Phone App: Portable Armory
    Urban · MaxwellKHA
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    double chapter, 33-34

    In the line of work at Mass nightclub, Rior doesn't drive. At this moment, he is leisurely walking on the side of the road, heading towards Y Group.
    My right eye is a godlike supercomputer.
    Sci-fi · SolsticeScribe
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  • DaoistORjyOL
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    so far a good novel for my tastes, but I would improve the use of this eye for, for example, scientific research, creating some new technological things. Updates so far look like the author updates every day. For now, I can't judge the background of the world, so I'll wait for the story to develop. Good luck to the author with this story.

    My right eye is a godlike supercomputer.
    Sci-fi · SolsticeScribe
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