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Mohd_Faizal_Khan5dCommentedAh-hah!! The true source of the non-binary quandary...
Melon seed face, large eyes, cute upturned nose, cherry lips, skin delicate and fair... it could be said he had inherited his mother Xu Meng's beauty quite well, and he would certainly be a fine beauty when he grew up.- Mohd_Faizal_Khan6dCommented
was the rat covered in actual blood or was it's fur red in colour?
Not long after, a calf-sized rat that was covered in blood-red crawled out. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan6dCommented
".. .filled with intense gunpowder" - unusual term; maybe use "they were primed powder kegs and looked like they were about to fight"
Angelina looked at the two of them. They were both filled with intense gunpowder and looked like they were about to fight. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan13dPosted
This book had been sitting in my reading list for more than a year; everytime I read a chapter I have to keep from kicking myself in the ass for not picking it up sooner. Storytelling at it's finest with a compelling plot and MC. Plot armour is especially thick but doesn't detract from a truly likable MC. How can someone be so OP & yet so clueless is beyond me - takes a very special mind to think up an MC like Yuan. What irks me the most are the chapter lengths - author-san, THEY ARE TOO SHORT! But your mastery for the Dao of the Cliffhanger is commendable. Am currently slightly less than halfway through the current release and unless something drastically changes with the storyline, I foresee pouring even more resources into unlocking future chapters. Live long and prosper author-san so you can continue the story.
- Mohd_Faizal_Khan18dCommented
*started
Booming sounds echoed out as the ice spikes clashed against the thick ice wall. Valery was rather confident in her ice wall, but her face changed greatly when the wall starter to crack by the onslaught of the ice spikes. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan18dCommented
*gauge i/o gauze
That wolf didn't care about its underlings and used them as canon fodders to gauze his strength. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan24dCommented
*bulged not bugled
After the meal, Mumu went to sleep on the chair nearby with a bugled belly. It let out a light burp from time to time. Meanwhile, Yun Lintian leaned on the chair, enjoying a cup of spirit tea. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan27dCommented
first comes wire affinity; to be followed by...cable? Lintian - Dao of the Heavenly Electrician
Yun Lintian had a variant profound vein with three elements - wood, water, and fire. Although he had a strong affinity for these elements, he couldn't ignore the fact that the water and wood contradicted the wire element, which significantly impacted his progress. Even though Yun Lintian chose to focus on only one element, he couldn't be compared to Yun Qianxue's Pure Water Profound Vein, which was a pure element profound vein. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan1mthCommented
2nd time author has used this term..
The merchant's burrows furrowed and they looked at Alex with confusion. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan1mthReplied to Aiden_KaraffaCh 25 End of the Auction
- Mohd_Faizal_Khan1mthCommented
affordable - cheap assed
Now that Li Zhirui was achieving success and was valued by Li Shiqing, he, as both an affordable master and an uncle, naturally felt honored. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan1mthCommented
Makes me think of an Aeldari worldship.
It was like nothing that he would have ever expected to see from Nico, an elegant hull with the flowing line of an exterior docking ring all down her main body's length, serving the secondary purpose of exterior armour to protect docked ships, with large oval pods seemingly inflated out of the ship, some made of transparent materials and filled with forests, and others opaque, in the same gold as the ship's hull. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthCommented
*palpitations i/o precipitation
This voice was enough to give them precipitations. The two replied, "Yes sir." - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthCommented
*tacit understanding
Given the tactic understanding they have developed over the years, it was easy for them to guess who was the person responsible for the explosions around the holding area. Sharpnel got to work as the two people hid in the corner, waiting for Hunk to arrive. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthCommented
ooohhh - burn...
There was none of his familiar hometown, and not the bald eagle that went around banging gongs and stealing oil. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthCommented
*Divulging i/o Diluting would be more apt
He had seen how strong the abilities of the instructors were. Yuu had great speed, John could meld in the shadows, Dalia was a super-brain. He did not know about Carlos and Charlotte. The abilities were all kept a secret. Diluting the details to everyone will make it a security issue, and if the details are unveiled to someone with a malicious heart, the result could only be imagined. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthReplied to THE_WORDSMITH
thanks!
Then he came to stand in front of Yuu, who also came from the other side, holding a spear in her hands. She was wearing common military training gear. A black shirt and black cargo pants paired with black jeans. Her hair still covered half of her face. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthCommented
how does someone wear both cargo pants and jeans @ the same time?
Then he came to stand in front of Yuu, who also came from the other side, holding a spear in her hands. She was wearing common military training gear. A black shirt and black cargo pants paired with black jeans. Her hair still covered half of her face. - Mohd_Faizal_Khan2mthReplied to cryzsalix
no problems mate, it's a good story
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