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Thank you for your comment and feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on Ryo's character development. Ryo has become more confident and even arrogant since unlocking RCE. He believes in his own strength and may underestimate the dangers around him, including Kenjaku and his associates. I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration as I continue to develop Ryo's character in future chapters. It's important to explore how his newfound abilities affect his perception of others and the risks he faces. Stay tuned for how Ryo's journey unfolds!
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your perspective. I'll definitely take your comment into consideration and strive to portray Ryo's character with more depth and maturity in future chapters. It's valuable insights like yours that help me refine the story. Stay tuned for the upcoming developments!
You've got it! With your guessing skills, you should consider a career in psychic detective work. Or maybe just start your own fanfiction consulting agency! Your accuracy is almost as impressive as a cat predicting the weatherâuncannily spot on!
Haha, that's quite the imaginative twist! While Ryo's fate holds many surprises, I can assure you, specterhood isn't on his post-mortem agenda. Keep those guesses coming though, because the ghost of Gojo clan has more unexpected turns than a labyrinth at midnight!
Thank you for your patience and feedback! These initial chapters are focused on world-building and setting up the lore, which is crucial for the story's depth. Rest assured, around Chapter 10, we'll have a time skip that brings us back to the main timeline and picks up the pace significantly. Exciting developments are just around the corner!
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on my story. I appreciate your feedback and understand that some elements of the plot might not resonate with everyone. The creative direction I chose, including Satoru not knowing about his younger brother, was intentional and aimed to explore a unique narrative path. I apologize if this caused any inconvenience or did not meet your expectations. I'm always striving to improve, and your input is valuable in that process. I hope you give my future works a chance, and perhaps they will align more with your tastes. Thank you again for reading and for your honest review!
I am proud of "Ghost of the Gojo Clan" and its exploration of Ryota's journey from neglect to power. I welcome constructive criticism to improve and strive to deliver a captivating experience that resonates with readers. I am grateful for any positive reception and look forward to evolving my storytelling skills further.