that sounds intriguing

hell yea here we go

that is true

I just like the way he writes

I enjoy how it's told its slow enough so it doesn't feel like it's jumping here and there but also fast enough so it doesn't feel standing still, the dialog is actual talking back and forth and just driving the plot forward, it has a nice story so far to OP but OP done right

Loved the chapter and loving this book

Ahh I'm not the only one who feels like this is AI

The best way to put it for this story, you're trying to hard to the point that you're making plot holes this early on in the story which usually won't matter expect, harry is supposed to be hidden for now, we haven't had any povs to make use like any other characters or what there up to, with that said Harry and the dialog at this point just sounds so forward no stops just plot points, no time to just to enjoy the characters, it feels a bit AI at times

To be honest the slowness is what makes me like this story a bit because it's building into something

Enjoyable and I'm guessing you use text to speech more then not, which is cool because it's well written even though may be.

There we go happy to see it

God there's slow then there is this

I just love your stuff

Also loving this story

If you read it again they've gotten better and fixed it

Been reading and this is one of the best teen wolf storys I've read plus just love that Chris still has a death wish to threaten the vampire and his girl both that can rival an alpha.

Just thought of it but because this is magic and he wants magic, wouldn't heading to places like fairy tail help him, I mean it's filled with magic

DND oh God naruto Is strong but DND is Chaotic

I like this guy, don't truly agree on his thought process though, he was trained to be perfect without a quirk so yea makes sense, his parents though loved him with or without a quirk hmm

Gojo is amazing lol